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First Impression: A nice image of the nature in the desert.

In your poem I see that you are telling the about the nature in the desert. The beauty of the night in the desert “MOON” “SNAKE” “MOUSE” “STORM” all together blended and create a beautiful image.

Overall Impressions: Nice wording. Good imagination. Rhyming well.

Suggestion : No suggestion.



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simply positive group.

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