Hello Mandy

I have enjoyed reading this well-composed rhyming verse. Here are just a few humble observations of mine.

This lovely Aubade is structured to show lovers parting at dawn.
" My sorrow dripped like morning dew,
................
then told me it was time to part"

The simile you used precisely suits the time and mood of the parting lovers. Secret love has its own charming fantasy.

The man who interrupts them must be her cold-hearted husband. Their "warning" was shown as being delivered by "That ivory sphere,"

Flow-
Memories, both sweet and bitter are brought about in lines that flow with the smoothness of a velvet moon.

Poetic language and setting remind me of past poets.

Write on!