Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

How I found your piece...I came across the piece when I was doing random reviews.

First impressions...This is a very inspiring poem. I love what you wrote, your theme is great.

Was the title interesting...Yes, I love the way the poet wants to become the poem.

Was the content rating appropriate...yes, nothing above an e here

Did you use a specific form of poetry...I did not notice a specific form, if there was one please let me know.

Did you follow the form...n/a

Was there rhythm and flow...Your poem is well written and the flow and rhythm is beautiful. It is wonderful when read aloud.

Any errors in grammar, spelling, or punctuation...none noted

Things I would change...nothing, I believe this is a wonderful piece.

Favorite parts/lines...the imagery in these lines is perfect...

And to not be the one who feels the unabating ache (of lost love)
behind the hands of the poet.



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