Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

TITLE: At first I thought I was going to read literally about a summer play, what a wonderful poem you have written!

THEME: The theme is fresh, with learning being a different thought on summer playing. What a great concept in such a short piece.

TONE AND PACE: The tone is fast paced and light, due to both the form and the theme/content

FLOW AND RHYTHM/METER: The form greatly influences the flow and rhythm of this piece. Being Haiku, the meter is dictated by the form, but your great sense of flow and choice of words has made this a truly delightful piece.

FORM: Your choice of theme and form lend themselves to a wonderful poem. The lightheartedness of the theme is reflected by the flow of the form.

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: Your imagery is great and your use of alliteration in the last line wraps up the poem quiet nicely.

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: I found no errors in your poem.

EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES: I really enjoyed the use of alliteration in this line.

summer sun shines bright

Great job with what I consider a difficult form.


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