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 Sparkle  [E]
A little bit of silliness because fairies get hormonal too
by ~MM~
Review of Sparkle  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi ~MM~ ,

This is a Simply Positive Review
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I liked your little story about a crow and an insect viewing human beings like the way we view fairies or a fantasy creature, saying that they only exists in books or children's stories. I also thought that this is a fable since the two animals are speaking. Giving the crow and evil touch made the story creepy.I had to read it a few times to know that Sparkle was the insect who the crow ate.

Overall, a creepy flash fiction. Write on!

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