Review number # 1 of week Feb. 19th-25th

Hi Bob,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: My Boss Reads My Facebook

First Impression: You do have the option of blocking him instead of closing your facebook page.

What I liked: Wishing that Anonymous takes ISIS down, I am surprised they haven't targeted them already.

What needs your attention: I believe you meant we're not were sowing China, we will fight for Democracy in Vietnam.

Favorite Parts: Fox news Greg getting drafted. Fox news should be banned period.

Overall Impression: My curiosity was peeked and satisfied, interesting read but you could elaborate more on freedom of speech and employers using facebook, all social media to invade employees personal space.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .