Review number # 2 of week 2/19-2/25

Hi J.Worth

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Time Limit

First Impression: Interesting concept of time.

What I liked: Time offers anything, but not everything's found.

What needs your attention: I see five lines in the first two stanzas and wonder why you did not continue with rhyming sequence you began to close the poem.

Favorite Parts: Time is fickle, yes it is and we are all guilty of misplacing it daily.

Overall Impression: Very creative and has potential to grow further.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .