Review number # 4 of week 2/19-2/25

Hi Salma,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: The Choice of Life and Sin

First Impression: I understand your mother's pain, I was molested by my father as well.

What I liked: How refreshing and direct the story is told without added words to make the story more dramatic. The story itself unfolds like it was intended.

What needs your attention: Nothing.

Favorite Parts: That your mother is beautiful and you love her very much. Every mom craves to hear those words, I hope you leave it for her to see often.

Overall Impression: My grandson is autistic and everything in the story unfolds in the same manner as if her was telling it. My grandson was non-verbal until he was 4, then one day he spoke. I hope your day comes as well. I wish the story was longer, I enjoyed being with you watching the sunrise with your mom and you. Thank you for sharing a difficult time in your family's life.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .