Review number #6 of week 2/19-2/25

Hi PhantomPen

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Unfinished

First Impression: Wow, I did not see that coming. I thought I was reading a story about Alzheimer's and the wife was watching her husband.

What I liked: The agony and loneliness apparent in both characters, I felt so sad.

What needs your attention: Nothing

Favorite Parts: The surprise in the ending when you revealed that he had killed her. I felt so bad for her but then when the demons came for him, I hoped they wouldn't take him either.

Overall Impression: Excellent, the story evolved in such an unexpected manner, and the ending was perfection!

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .