This is a cute little story. I enjoyed reading it. You have beautiful sense of writing when it comes to imagery and describing what is around you. I could see the barren forest floor, the green buds shooting out from grey stems, and the little tiny heads poking out of the leaves. Your story line was clever and I found myself wanting to meet these curious Infinitesimal Beeps. I'll have to admit that's a little hard to say, but I liked it! I almost think that should be the title of the story instead of Kernel just because Kernel really isn't the main focus of the sorry rather it is all the Beeps and what they do. Still, that's just my opinion.



This was very well done except for this one punctuation error I found:

...the sun stood strong with yellow blossoms [,] and I was the lucky one to walk the path...

Keep writing!

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