This is a cleverly constructed invitation to go exploring down the rabbit hole into the world of wonderland. It's a good use of the picture prompt -- great picture.
Your use of short lines and rhyme give the poem strong rhythm and a fast, even flow. It's very easy to read.
I really like how you use the repeating line.
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