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Wonderland  [13+]
Alice in Wonderland image prompt. Entry for Dark Dreamscapes (Round 3).
by Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk
Review of Wonderland  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk

This is a cleverly constructed invitation to go exploring down the rabbit hole into the world of wonderland. It's a good use of the picture prompt -- great picture.

Your use of short lines and rhyme give the poem strong rhythm and a fast, even flow. It's very easy to read.

I really like how you use the repeating line.

Congratulations on having this featured in the poetry newsletter.

Best wishes,
Mark


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