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Hello Angel

This is a wonderful example of a traditional haiku with it's reference to nature. I think the title is well chosen and relevant to the piece. You capture well this moment in time while the cub is waiting to grow up. As is essential with this form, you make every word count.

This was a joy to read and I'm happy to give it a full five stars.

Write on!

Best wishes,
Mark


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