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 Embryo (two poems)  [E]
Inspired by a picture of a plant growing in an eggshell
by Cynaemon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Cynaemon

Haiku and acrostics are two of my favourite forms of poetry so I was intrigued by how you have used these two forms to write on the same subject, seeing a picture of a plant growing out of an eggshell. I think they really compliment each other, and you use both forms to great effect. The flow of the acrostic was slightly uneven but it's still a great poem.

I really enjoyed reading these short poems today. Thanks for sharing your work.

Best wishes,
Mark


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