Hi, Dragon is hiding , I am Prosperous Snow celebrating . I am reviewing "Invalid Item"  for "I Write in December-January-February" .

First Thoughts: The title aroused my curiosity.

Hook: The hook is in the first sentence with the smell of chocolate muffins.

I like: I like the characters because their actions was normal.

Characters: The characters act like normal siblings.

Dialog: The dialog is part of the action and helps move the plot forward at a good pace.

Setting: The description of the setting is written into the action.

Voice: First person.

Suggestions: None.

Final Thoughts: I enjoyed reading this intriguing story. Write on.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .