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 What's going on?  [E]
confusion leading to the realization of how only time will tell
by Chi
Review of What's going on?  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Chi
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My name is Mina~ and I'm reviewing for "The Simply Positive Group" . I want to welcome you to WDC and thought I would give you some feedback on your work. I strive to give honest reviews and I hope you find this review helpful.

*Mushroomv* Initial Impression: A thoughtful poem.

Yes you are right you will discovered it in due time. In our life we have so many questions. At first we don't know how to face this. When we experienced we know everything. With experience you get knowledge of everything around you.

Nice starting free verse.

Suggestion : I think if you add few lines would have been better.
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*Starp* Mina *Starfishp*
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simply positive group.
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