Cute. I definitely enjoyed this poem and the basic idea behind it. For the most part, the rhyme and rhythm pulled me along. It seems to have a consistent rhyme scheme of abcb for each stanza. The rhythm is also pretty good. The stanzas alternate between 8 syllables and six syllables. I count seven syllables in the very last line and it does make that line sound a little strange.

Actually, I counted the syllables in every line because I thought a few of them sounded a little "off-beat". Interestingly, I did not find any that had the wrong number of syllables except for that last one, but I noticed that my least favorite lines were the ones which mentioned Buzz Lightyear. Maybe that's because it's a single syllable first name followed by a two syllable last name so you have three syllables that are spaced kind of unevenly in the line.

Oh well.