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 Love, Relationships, and Family  [E]
AN article with my own twist.
by poetpea
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (3.0)
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Hi poetpea Welcome to WDC. I am now one of your Item.

The subject of your article make me read. In this article you described the relation between men and women and their family. Our parents love us and taught us what life is? They learning life lessons at home. Our parents taught to take challenges of day-to-day living . Everybody want a happy family. If anybody losses job that can effect in his/her family. Women took part a leading role of the family. A thoughtful article with many good words.

Suggestion: I think if you put some paragraph break then it will be interesting to read. Keep writing.


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