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Review by ~ Santa Sisco ~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi PandaPaws Licensed VetTech . Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review and rate your item on behalf of "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP. I am not an expert but I will give you my honest and positive opinion of your work. This is the review to accompany the AwardIcon I gave you for your winning my package in the "Invalid Item.


Overall Impression:

This is a very moving poem in Rhopalic Verse about the horrific events of 9/11. Emotions for normal humans (Non-terrorists) run high when reading a poem with this subject matter. The flow of the poem is just right and the words are very carefully chosen to say so much in a few lines. You have quite rightly added a description of the form so we, as readers, can review it correctly. The title and description are just right for this work. The description is the "Selling point" to draw a readers interest and make them want to click on the item - It worked for me! *Smile*

Suggestions:

I have none.

What I Liked Most:

You have managed to convey a great deal of emotions in such a small poem.

Summary and rating:

I thoroughly enjoyed your, "attempt to Memorialize September 11th in a Rhopalic Poem." I believe you did a good job of doing just that. *Bigsmile* Poetry is about making a reader "Feel" something, and you accomplished that with this poem. Well done! *Heart*

Don't forget this is just my opinion and I am NO expert!

It does however, deserve the *Star**Star**Star**Star**Star* Stars I have rated it!

Warmest regards, *Smile*

*Star* Sisco *Star*

"I am very well balanced, what I lack in ability, I make up for with enthusiasm."



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