I love this poem. It gives me a good feeling at the end. I love how you bring in so many other images, but in the end I haven't lost sight of the two people sleeping together. The third Stanza is my favorite. I just love the image of it, and the way you tie in other people. I like this because even though you aren't referencing other couples or other people it makes me think of how other people live and successfully gives contrast to what's going on in the poem.I even love the flow of the poem. Overall, you've done an amazing job here.