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 ON THE INTERNET  [E]
Meeting and falling in love with someone from the dialogue in a IM.
by Caressa
Review of ON THE INTERNET  
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is pretty impressive, meeting Mr. Right via the internet and go all the way to to meet him personally.

It is told like a story as to how love matured and mellowed to end in a happy union.
The hesitancy on the part of the lady is just natural.
However what is different about the story is its background. During the internet era, it seems quite apt to fall in love with someone whom you cannot see. The feelings are however just the same when you meet someone face to face and confess love.
Rhyming-
Rhyming is done with the suitable endings and word choices. It lent color to the theme of love over the internet.

Imagery-
Each stage is well depicted so it is easy for the reader to see it all.

It flows well.

Write on!
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