This is a wonderful poem, reflecting on both positive and negative aspects of silence. I love how you've used alliteration. This helps give the poem a lot of pace and rhythm. I think it's very clever how in the early part of the poem silence is something soft, tranquil and welcome but then it turns into something considerably more violent and very unwelcome. I think this will be a new way of viewing silence for many readers.
A thought-provoking piece, I much enjoyed reading.
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