Greetings, Matt ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" ! What a great twist at the end! It never dawned on me how you came up with the name. Since this is a public review, I won't spill the beans! You followed the prompt nicely. Your story flowed well. Great visuals, lol. I especially liked this visual: Gallant, handsome and a stomach that you could grate cheese on. Best of luck in the contest! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ") My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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