Greetings, {suser:as***a}! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" !

I really enjoyed the tone to this piece. You followed the prompt nicely.

Your flow is lovely, also.

My favorite lines:
He wanted it after the nightfall,
when Orion is high up and the moon is full.

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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