Review number # 1 of week 2/20-3/25

Hi Angela,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Tomorrow's Vision (prologue)

First Impression: It struck me really amusing because I just dragged my husband to a quilt show that he was not interested in to say the least but once he was there he met some really engaging artists.

What I liked: I enjoyed the flattery and the other women rolling their eyes yet Karissa chose to wink back. That's an invitation to continue and I was glad it did.

What needs your attention: Nothing at this point, I am looking forward to seeing where it goes. Normally, this is not a genre I read but williampadgett spoke very well of your writing so I came to explore.

Favorite Parts: Karissa building the fire, I truly get bored with the typical man scenario doing the fire, setting the scene. It is refreshing to read a woman doing the scene setting.

Overall Impression: Interesting beginning to the story with a twist at the end, curiosity aroused by what is going to happen with Isabel and Charles.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .