Review number # 2 of week 3/20-3/25

Hi Angela

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Tomorrow's Vision

First Impression: Wow, I did not expect this at all. When I read the prologue, I was thinking good romance story.

What I liked: The dreams that Karissa does not know if they are real or not real. Nor did I?

What needs your attention: Nothing, I am enjoying this immensely.

Favorite Parts: Grandma talking about the psychic interactions not being wise. Is she really opening doors to danger?

Overall Impression: I really enjoyed this, loved the cookies being flung by Serena and then they hadn't been, twists and more twists! Awesome.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .