Review number # 4 of week 3/20-3/25

Hi Gabriella,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Summers in Maine

First Impression: I saw the title and I just had to read, I am a Maine girl myself.

What I liked: The painted fishing boats pointed nose to the dock like Pollock canvas. I know just what you mean, it is awesome to watch the fisherman begin their days. My son is a lobsterman in Stonington, Maine.

What needs your attention: It would be nice if you mentioned what part of Maine you were describing because not all areas are the same along the coast.

Favorite Parts: The image of children lying on sweet grass watching the clouds, moon and the stars in the night sky. I miss that so much now living in a city because the light distortion hides so much of mother nature's true beauty.

Overall Impression: For a few brief moments, you took me home again. I thank you for the trip down your memory lane and a sweet reminder of my own.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my IMMENSE pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .