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 | Every Ten Steps  [13+] In a world where revenue is an issue, taxing every tenth step is only the beginning...  |
| (5.0)   "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello there, Than Pence This is a Simply Positive Review!   Oh, my goodness, I laughed myself silly picturing this whole scenario. I loved visualizing these characters, the elderly being carried around by the youth and the use of creative ways to prevent having to pay the "step-tax." It was hilarious!  You've cleverly crafted a explosive result of over-taxation of the public. The Ten-Step tax, followed by the "Fiftieth Wheel Rotation" tax, was just the beginning of a way to bleed the public dry with over-taxation and the never ending need of officials to find more reasons to get more from our wallets. Air tax? Why not! I mean we've all got to breathe. It's something we do each day that adds carbon dioxide to the air.  Yeah,right WebWitch, don't give them any ideas.  I loved this story for its humor and I also found the horror woven into the fiction because if they could do it and get away with it, you can bet they would try it.Well done! Love it just as is! I am highlighting this one in the 3/25, Comedy Newsletter.  Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch
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