Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Death Decides is a look at what we must all face.
We are born, we live, we love, we age, and then we perish.
Your piece draws the reader in with a building up to the main point about midway through.
The dominant emotional impact is sadness and the unpredictable nature of death.
Form is consistently created.
Rhyming lends a rhythmical timber.
Flow is smooth and sensory filled.
Pace is slow, as the reader digests the thoughts about a subject we all face at one point in our lives.
Grammatically pristine, nary a suggestion for improvement is needed here.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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