Welcome to the WdC!
Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

An incredible tale of life is found here.
From the origin, to growth, to present day.
The emotional tag most prevalent is pride in heritage.
Rhyming is present, even if it's not in a traditional 4 line stanza format,
the rhyme does help the flow of the piece overall.
The pace is slow and steady, as your piece develops and comes to it's intended conclusion.
No suggestions for improvement are necessary here. You are encouraged to,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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