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Review of Jane's Psalm 2  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Stepping lightly in this place of praise.
Awe and respect for the Creator, no fear.
Emotional tags that are prevalent there.
The reader can see; the Lord you hold dear.

Form and structure are tight,
yet in this case it's just right.
Rhyming is remarkable,
and adds a melodious sparkle.

Flow is smooth as silk,
Paced like a quite walk along side the sea shore.
Grammatically snafu free,
Thank you for being thee.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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