Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Wow! Your piece has pow.
First lines create fear, for no way did you just jump!
That's emotion that grabs the reader by the throat.
Being afraid of heights, it would be hard for me to even look down from the mountain top.
Form and structure are immaculate.
Prosaic in nature, there is a rhythmical flow.
Soaring on the winds currents,
the reader is amazed by the view you describe.
Flow is so natural and smooth,
Pace is fast and exhilarating, and dazzling too.
Grammatically clean as a whistle,
all this reader can reommend is,

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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