Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Your declaration of faith in the Lord is loud and clear.
The reader is aware of your intention from the start.
There is that sense of adoration and praise going on here.
Emotional tags that bring the reader into the scene.
Form is adequate.
Rhyme scheme is delicate.
Flow is oh so smooth,
Pace is a gentle canter to the end.
Grammatically snafu free,
Yippee!

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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