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 My works - the little pieces of my heart  [E]
That is my manner, be it wrong or right – I either write the truth or do not write.
by Irina Garbo
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Welcome to the WdC!

Found your piece in the Spiritual Newsletter 3-25-15
I often use the NLs to garner reviewing fodder.

Your manner, your way, writing the truth.
The reader feels that emotional bond.
Form and structure are consistent.
Rhyme scheme is persistent.
Flow is smooth and melodious,
Pace is slow and senses laborious.
Grammatically speaking, no snafu's are peeking.

Write on!
Copenator out! BA, M Div
founder of Copenator's Crew
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