Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

TITLE: Again, the perfect title for an Acrostic

THEME: Fun and relaxing at the rock by the falls! You take the fast pace of the falls and slow it down to sitting on the rock in the niche. Great job and great use of imagery.

FLOW: Your flow is wonderful because of your description on the scenery. I can almost feel the spray and smell the water from here.

RHYTHM/METER: You use your words wisely to create a well paced poem around the Acrostic, almost building the poem around the first letters instead of just trying to make them fit.

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: Your imagery is spot on, a great piece and I am glad to have found it.

EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES:
As you can see I am taken in by the imagery and the wonderful work you have done here!
My favorite line of all is...

A paradise in the midst of turmoil.

Excellent work!

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