Review number # 3 of week 3/25-4-1

Hi Kittycat,

My name is Lyn and I am doing a review for Simply Positive.

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! Please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Dream Light

First Impression: I wonder what happened to sadden the writer's point of view on love.

What I liked: The image of dancing in brilliant light while rinsing one's soul in gentle rain. I would enjoy that myself today, it's been such a long time since I have seen a sun shower.

What needs your attention: Nothing, it flows well and rhyme works well.

Favorite Parts: The author's belief that change will occur and she will find bliss once again in summation of her poem.

Overall Impression: The images were enjoyable and the poem rhymed well, the love of poetry is apparent.

Thank you for letting me read your work. It was my pleasure!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .