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| (5.0)   "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello there, Ghostranch This is a Simply Positive Review!   I found your item in ♥Hooves♥ " "One Writer's Favorites!"   Your poem spoke volumes of truth within a few verses. It has strength in the words chosen weaving a tapestry line to line to bring all these emotions to the reader. It's true, those who run in packs to feel powerful are cowards on their own. They choose to bully, harass and embarrass others with disabilities or physical and or emotional problems in order to make themselves appear to be superior. You did a great job with your free verse poem, which I really enjoy. You told a story using the perfect words to paint the image of these "savages."Loved this part: "Ferocious fangs tear flesh from fragile souls, swallow it and spew it out again. All the while laughing, a hollow sound echoing from monstrous mouths, carried on putrid breath. Empty, pitiless orbs roll manically in sockets and cruel clown grins stretch across foul faces, as they discard one victim"  Great use of alliteration, consonance, assonance and sibilance. Well done and with smooth agility of verses, melding together a fine poem about unsavory characters and their power plays over ones they consider weaker than they.  Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch
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You responded to this review 04/01/2015 @ 3:13pm EDT