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Basset Hound Spring  [E]
A Limerick for The Bard's Hall Contest March 2015
by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello there, ♥Hooves♥
This is a Simply Positve Review!*Vine1*

*Checkerboard* Thank you for entering the March Bard's Hall contest.

*Laugh* Too funny! I loved the playful images, the rhythm and thyme and the weaving of it all from line to line. *Pointleft*

*Umbrellag* It was a lengthy Limerick, which deserves a kudos, for it is much harder to keep the rhythmic and humorous story moving along and keeping the time. You've done this splendidly!

*Painting* I loved the images popping into my mind's eye as I read through each verse.

*Tea* I cannot think of a place to improve -- you've got the old Limerick touch down pat.

Well done! *Bursto*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




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