Dear Alexia Wynd ,

This is review #4 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

How did I come across your piece?
I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Journey Through Genres: Official Contest" . Thanks for entering! This review is done in order to recognize your participation in the contest, as well as for me to read each entry and place my decision in with the others . We thank you for your continued support.

 I hope you can gather some useful information from the review, even if it is just to find out whether or not I enjoyed reading your piece. Remember, I am but the reader, the story is yours and you alone can decide if anything should be altered. I can merely offer my advice and opinions on what I am reading. My intentions are pure, to never do harm, only offer my view.



My overall thoughts:
A spooky tale of moving into a house full of secrets. There were reasons why Grandpa never let little Jenny stay the night. I feel that this is actually a shortened version of a longer piece. The person behind the walls seems obsessed with Jenny and I feel you could build a whole novel around this and turn it into a great book.

~one minor technical issue was some brackets and [center]~ ~ ~[/center] I believe you meant to use the {} brackets to make it work.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .