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 Daddy and Me  [13+]
A child sees their father through their eyes.
by R. D. Lane
Review of Daddy and Me  
Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hi R. D. Lane I just read your story.

If the parents are unhappy then the children’s are unhappy. Sometimes parents don’t understand that. When they quarrel it affects children’s life. Children love both mom and dad and they want them together. In your story you tell that.
Character buildings are good.


Mina.




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