Greetings, Louise Wiggins is Elizabeth ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" !

I have always worried about that exact same thing! Something is going to bite me while I sit there! I've often thought it might be a snake. My in-laws have property in the upper peninsula of Michigan where we go camping now and then. They have an old outhouse we've all had the privilege of using. Ugh! The smell of awful! But the thought of other things that live in the hole is worse!

As you can see, I really got into your entry. I certainly connected with it, that's for sure.

My favorite lines:
your turn will come
you'll see

Hee-hee! Since I've already partially had this experience, these lines make me smile (or snicker ) for those who have not had this experience... but someday will. But seriously... let's hope not!

Best of luck in the contest!

Oops! Almost forgot! You'll need to change your content rating due to the curse word in the second stanza, third line. Nice rhyming there!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

Cubby ")


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .