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Hi Zeke, I am now reviewing one of your poems. Though I am not a good reviewer but your poems make me read your poem.

God fixed our fate. We are not always reach our goal though we set them. Some things are beyond our power to change and too much worried is bad for health. It can make us feel extreme fear, depression, and emotional. I like the lines
Our imaginations flow
Over possibilities;
Good and bad scenarios
Confront us with equal ease.

Nice wording, good rhyming & flows.

Mina.

simply positive group.
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