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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E) A group whose mission is to spread positivity. #1384154 by Simply Positive

Hello Strega

This is a wonderfully creative little poem. I love how you've structured it -- clever without being showy or pretentious. You've got some great turns of phrase here and the way certain lines echo each other with their partial repetitions is excellent; particularly how your 5th line reflects the your 1st. The ending is quite bleak but powerful. I have no hesitation in giving this poem a full five stars and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Best wishes,
Mark


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