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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello there, Bear Hunter
This is a Simply Positive Review! *Dolphin*

*Equalizer* Your poem reaches out and grabs the reader forcing her to view life in a fast-forward direction, to where there is only the end of the road.

*Pool* I find the spiritual connection and I see the doubts through this man's eyes. He feels there is no wonderful gift awaiting his arrival and that he has done all of his living on earth and that is his forevermore.

*Microscope* I think I caught a little questioning of his own beliefs, a sort of: "Just in case I'm wrong about a heavenly afterlife" pray for my soul, anyway. There is always wonder of what will happen or the sinking feeling that nothing happens may creep into one's psyche, thus testing their faith.

*Note* Your poem is very philosophical and spiritual. It makes the reader think and conclude with their own wishes, beliefs and ideas of the perfect afterlife.

*Palette* Well done, fine rhythm and rhyme throughout and quite an intense message woven within the lines for each reader to interpret.

I have nothing to suggest for change, thus I am returning the auto-reward GPs. *Fairyr*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch




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