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 Review #4104028 |
 | Longing for deer season  [13+] Feelings about deer season  |
| (4.0)   "SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC.  This is a Simply Positive Review!  I enjoyed the view of life from the deer stand, whereby you become one with the natural surroundings and have a more spiritual connection to the Creator. You tell of your enjoyment of deer hunting season and thank the Lord for providing this bountiful blessing for the family. Respect for all the gifts offered to us by Him, are woven within the lines of your prose.Observation:  It would be a good idea to break up the paragraphs for easier reading on a monitor. Skipping two spaces between each paragraph would be a good way to accomplish that. I had to change the rating on this item due to the word "assassinate." There is a lot of wisdom shared here and some spiritual soul food. You bring a reader into your world and paint nature in a picture that they may not have seen before in real life, yet they saw it here, within their mind's eye. Well done!  Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch
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