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Hello there, Newbie! Welcome to WDC. *Seahorseo*
This is a Simply Positive Review!

*Shamrock* What a sweetness this poem offers for the reader's pleasure. The love that is caring, trusting and real -- the love that can span the miles, the days the months or years, yet still be resilient and snap back to where it left off, is indeed a blessed love. It is the perfect friendship, one that lasts forever. Friends can come in and out of ones life, but true friendship is a rarer jewel. To love the one that is the true friend makes for a beautiful relationship.



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"is what i [I] always heard,"



*Tack* You make the reader feel the emotional tie, as it is woven within each line. It's great when poetry makes the reader feel the emotions portrayed.

*Butterflyv* The rhythm and rhyme flowed along smoothly and sparked images in the reader's mind's eye.



I love this part:

"Now many many miles apart
our paths may cross one day
I love you with all of my heart
may you be blessed in every way"


Lovely! *Coffeeg*

Until next time--write on!

Regards,
WebWitch


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