This is a wonderful, allegorical poem. So creative and original. I love the central idea of working on a difficult piece of writing (drafting and redrafting, 'unpicking') being like Frankenstein creating his monster from a mish-mash of body parts. I wish I'd come up with that one! Your title is amazing too -- really attention grabbing and fitting to the subject matter.
I found no errors at all. The poem flows well and is a pleasure to read. I'm also sure I won't be the only reader here on WDC to nod with recognition while reading.
Well-deserving of a full 5 stars.
Great job! On this evidence, I really look forward to reading more of your work.
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