Review 6 of 6 for this week


Hello, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing this piece as part of the Simply Positive Group!

TITLE: I have read most of your 'color' poems. I began with blue because it is my favorite color and then I jumped to purple. I decided to review Green because of the 'hidden' meaning I found in it.

THEME: Money and how we rely upon it to live.

TONE: It is matter of fact, not condemning nor accusatory. Just plainly stating that we all need money to live yet to gain that money we most lose something...life.

FLOW: Lovely flow for an acrostic, which I personally feel is one of the most difficult forms to write.

RHYTHM/METER: You maintain a wonderful flow and rhythm to this poem, you have chosen your words wisely and well.

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE: Your imagery is great, I love the picture you paint with your words.

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: I see nothing to improve upon.

EXCELLENT WRITING EXAMPLES:

This is my favorite part of your piece...

remnants of life

Beautiful job!


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