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 Broken again   [E]
A girl who thought love was everything
by Flowers
Review of Broken again  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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In last but one line there is a grammatical mistake in construction. The poem is about ta broken heart. It is full of emotional ride, up and down, mainly down with no positive thoughts about mending it. The loss is for sure and the person is really falling apart and needs a positive avenue to visit.
A good read,
Jaya H.


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