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 Nature's Keeper  [ASR]
I love the Native ways and cultures. This reminds me of their ideas.
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Review of Nature's Keeper  
Review by jaya h
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
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In this poem historical events put together in unique way. the messages from them are not very clear but rather hidden. The flow is good with A scheme of rhyme well maintained. The comparison here with the ancient cultures is farfetched and doesn't appeal to a reader that profoundly.
An interesting work,
Jaya H.

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