Greetings, Stephanie Hazel ! Thank you for entering "The Writer's Cramp" !

Prompt by shaara: Write a story or poem in which you sprinkle in words from a foreign language. Punctuate these words by using italics.

What a unique twist on this prompt! Very nicely written.

Great job following the prompt.

I loved the lines:

“Calm down, you can do this.” I stare in disbelief at a man dressed in a simple Roman toga, and amazingly, I do calm down. This guy is a senex, an old man with a wise look, but he’s grey and pale, like a ghost. In fact I’m pretty sure that’s exactly what he is.

Best of luck in the contest!

Have a great day and...
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !

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